In many countries, people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away.
What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?
Throwaway society, which has spread the wings almost throughout the world, has led to this question that the durability of using things is very short in this society. This essay will explain the causes of why it is happening and problems that take birth due to this.
The number of reasons needs to be considered that seem to be responsible in certain ways. The first and foremost is online heavy discounts, which allure the people to buy new things at very low prices, are likely to become the main reason for throwing away the old items. For instance, Amazon, which is one of the popular sites, gives heavy discounts to people for buying things in bulk. Not only this, people have become modernized; they do not like to use things for a long time, which becomes the major cause of the replacement of old items into new ones. Moreover, the working capacity of things is very low that leads to damage; the repair of things also requires much money and time, which seems to be impossible in this busy world.
There is a number of problems that arise due to the throwaway society. Firstly, it leads to the excessive amount of garbage, which gives birth to pollution, thereby burning the things, and it inclines the expenditure of money on new things because the short term usage of goods becomes the reason of more productivity of new things, whereby the companies increase the prices of new items due to the high demand of purchasing.
In conclusion, replacing old items into new ones cannot be considered negatively, but it should be a limit for avoiding the dire consequences and the smooth running of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rowing away the old items. For instance, Amazon, which is one of the popular site...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72340425532 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44497824444 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8551909891 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.2 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224217772291 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958362637446 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531838119959 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123048140238 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755002750556 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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