I wanted to express my awkward situation I had during my flight to Dubai two weeks ago.
I was heading to terminal 2 to get on the plane and I was in such a hurry and forgot to watch the flights information on screen. This had led me to go to a wrong departure terminal which caused me a tremendous plight and I lost my flight to Dubai. I was going to Dubai for an highly important business trip. As I mentioned earlier, our company held a meeting in Dubai to attract some funds to build a hospital complex in middle-east. I was in charge of project manager to demonstrate our initial plan to our partners. Because of this coincidence, our company have lost almost $2 million which would destruct it's reputation in first place.
I would appreciate your understandings about this issue cause mistakenly by airport. I behalf of my company would request a compensation of $500,000 in cash. As it might lessen the severity of the problem occurred.
I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'flights'' or 'flight's'?
Suggestion: flights'; flight's
...in such a hurry and forgot to watch the flights information on screen. This had led me ...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ight to Dubai. I was going to Dubai for an highly important business trip. As I me...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oincidence, our company have lost almost million which would destruct its reputat...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ncidence, our company have lost almost million which would destruct its reputation in ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...quest a compensation of 00,000 in cash. As it might lessen the severity of the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66120218579 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78856694144 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633879781421 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.168894751 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132665148702 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445706088892 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463918897012 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769538946159 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368225576099 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.