You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to my watch which was lost in a train journey.
As I was travelling to my home town for Christmas vacation to meet my parents. Unfortunately, during my journey in the train, I had kept my watch aside as it was uncomfortable to wear it for long hours. It was a brown colour leather belt Rolex watch.
Unknowingly, I left my watch in the S4 compartment of the Abu Dhabi to Dubai train. The train number is 124. I had kept the watch in the side pocket of the seat. My seat number was 24 B. It was a window seat.
It will be really kind of you, if you can help me find my watch. It was a very precious gift given by my grandmother. I would seek your staffs help as well to find my watch. I will be glad if my watch is found.
Your efforts will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Jessica Ayri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24137931034 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51303905777 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1402736305 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.125 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.875 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939903467469 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036022354198 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044022541407 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658428798776 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044036652757 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 70.7449484536 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 7.45979381443 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.