Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
"Money is the worst discovery of human life but it is my trusted material to trust human nature". Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that is governor- agencies should have expenditure economy on railway's than roads construction or not ? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side of the argument, there are people who believe that if government will being spend money on railway's development than roads. They strengthen their view point by claiming that It is highly beneficial for individual, Due to this reason, firstly, population will become surging nowadays. Whereas it helps to control the traffic .other hand, trains is cheaper transport than other public transportation. According to my perspective, secondly, it is convenient source for everyone.
To some extent, in the contemporary scenario a technology change railway transport in electrical trains so finally, it is the best way to protect environment for pollution. In my point of view, I strongly support this idea, administration should spend money on electrical trains.
Admittedly, some may disagree by coming up with the idea, there is an opposing group of people who believe that government expend money on roads construction than trains path. To make their arguments convincing, they claim that the roads is beneficial for transportation business from one nation to another. Additionally, they have highly beneficial to merchants. It will be sophisticated for goods to home delivery. Due to this reason, especially, railway track could not have provide facility to home delivery. The best epitome that is Pakistan and India, both nation are import food used to roads not railway train's . Especially, it is the best way and not enough expensive for business man.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that, weighing both the options; I believe that there is no single conclusion still; I take this got that effective clap requires both use of hands, I reckon that both transportation is beneficial and significant for individuals. Railway is save a ton of time and other hand, roads vehicle is cheaper so, according my perception, government spend economy on both development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31733333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00644613247 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9836311627 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.947368421 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19138875043 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561417364834 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402506940406 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106962202141 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274919923107 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.