In many countries it is easy to apply and to get a credit card. However, credit card Dept causes many problems and is hard to pay back. Do you think the advantages of credit cards overweight the disadvantages.
We live in a disposable, 'cast-off and throw-away' society that has largely lost any real sense of performance; Nothing is absolute. One of the most controversial issue today relates to this whether the use of credit card is responsible for raising lots of obstacles or it is a benefical for everyone? In this essay,I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that merits of using credit card considerably outweigh its drawbaks. The main reason for believing this is that nowadays, credit cards are regularly used by people for paying online fees either for educational purposes or for filling online vacancies. It is also possible to say that for online shopping credit card plays highly significant role in this modern era. A good illustration of this is that there are many branded companies for instance, Adidas, Apple and many more who sell their products online. So, it is only possible with the assistance of using credit card.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that there are some demerits of using credit card. First and the foremost is that some people believe that it is not useful for old people. They often have this opinion because they are not well aware about new technologies. Therefore, unable to use such kind of electronic services. Moreover, in present scenerio, cyber crime is also at its peak. Ultimately, lead to missuse of credit card by hackers. A recent survey published in Hindustan times related to cyber crime by some hackers which were punished for hacking software is the best epitome of this.
As we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that nodoubt, there are so many advantages of using credit cards in different sectors like business. Meanwhile, there are also some drawbacks of using it which may be related to the unawareness of new technology or cyber crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85588235294 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57479632681 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2307058761 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8947368421 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226688548087 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827066674835 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974144345724 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146418431058 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608359796822 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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