In the 21st century, we have bundles of options in a transportation system, trains, aeroplanes, buses, cars, motorbikes and many more to reach our destinations. However, still, we are unable to reach our destinations in exact time sometimes. Public transportation is preferred by some individuals to travel while others argue that own cars are the excellent mode of transportation. In my opinion, Although public transport is a bit expensive in terms of time, despite that it is eco-friendly and best for our society to use.
Firstly, every national government has provided the service of public transport by means of buses and trains to support the transportation system for the common man and tried to make it convenient for everyone in their countries. Low fair prices of these transportation systems make it fit into everyone's budget and use of these conveniences are considered environmentally friendly. Take an example, Use of a bus from one destination to other will cost the same as 2 cars can in terms of pollution, however, a bus can 40 passengers and a car can only 10.
On the other hand, traffic congestion is one of the major drawbacks of using public transport and fixed timings of buses make it inconvenient occasionally. In addition, lack of comfort zone can also be considered as a negative point in public transportation especially during rush hours such as, in Mumbai, it is quite difficult to take a train by irregular commuter during the peak time.
In conclusion, in spite of having hurdles in using public transport, it still has an outweigh in using transportation system as compare to personal transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supporting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: supporting
... transport by means of buses and trains to support the transportation system for the commo...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in using public transport, it still has an outweigh in using transportation system as compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20518270292 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5831696724 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392833800026 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158934703187 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11311733159 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252006181762 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771106377525 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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