You would like to attend a seminar in another country that is your work related. Write a letter to the person managing the seminar and ask the details about program, dates, accommodation, cost.
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to take part in the seminar taking place in France. I am working in a multinational company in the same field, i would like to ask some details about the event.
First come the dates of the event, please share the complete information so that I can arrange my travel.
Secondly kindly do give me details about program, outlines of topic to be shared so that I prepare myself to attend the session.
I have no one in that city where the seminar is happening so i will be needing some place to stay over. A place which is nearby the location of event would do great. It can be an apartment or a hotel room, but it should be clean and presentable.
It would be great if you help me with managing things and calculate the total cost I have to bear including travelling, food, accommodation and seminars fee.
I will be waiting for your reply, thank you in advance for your help.
Your sincerely
Rabail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I would like to take part in the seminar...
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Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ultinational company in the same field, i would like to ask some details about th...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... city where the seminar is happening so i will be needing some place to stay over...
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Line 8, column 69, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...here the seminar is happening so i will be needing some place to stay over. A place which ...
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Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvance for your help. Your sincerely Rabail.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52325581395 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51003933397 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2822901751 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243106690613 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859215811649 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646888617463 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111120251714 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816101313849 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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