You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in connection with the discussion we had yesterday, I want some leaves from work to complete my study program in which I have enrolled last year.
However, it is difficult for you to provide me days off at this time of the year when appraisals are around, but it is very important for me to complete this program as soon as possible else the institute will cancel my registration.
I will pay extra time to my job once my course is completed. It is significant subject for my job role as well, it will benefit me in many ways. I am sure you and management will understand my situation.
Kindly grant me 20 days holidays so that I accomplish my goal. It will be fruitful for me and company both. I will be very grateful to you. Waiting for reply.
Your sincerely,
Sam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing in connection with the disc...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Waiting for reply. Your sincerely, Sam.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44295302013 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64008454302 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.880565189 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249188362623 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927191624857 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561692523188 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139237652906 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455214759217 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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