The daigrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the cancrete for building purposes?
The given flow diagram depicts the information about the process of cement and concrete production by some equipments and material.which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that cement production is done by differnt working stages.firstly limestone and clay is crush is crush with the help of crusher moreover then limestone and clay change to powder and then that powder heat in rotating heater. After that heat is introduced from the end of tube before the mixture is actually drop on the grander.At last, complete the cement process and finally packed in bags.
As far as trend,is concerned that production of concrete that process complete with five stages and we need four products(cement,water,sand and gravel and we should take cement 15%, water 10%, sand 25% and greval 50% and then concrete mixture rotate in clock wise direction when ever material is properly not mix. After that complete that process.
Overall, it is evident that the steps of making cement are more complicated and require advance machinery while concrete production mixing of components in the right proportion in machine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is crush'.
Suggestion: is crush
...rking stages.firstly limestone and clay is crush is crush with the help of crusher moreover then ...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en that powder heat in rotating heater. After that heat is introduced from the end of...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dropped'.
Suggestion: dropped
... of tube before the mixture is actually drop on the grander.At last, complete the ce...
^^^^
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...mixture is actually drop on the grander.At last, complete the cement process and f...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , is
...finally packed in bags. As far as trend,is concerned that production of concrete t...
^^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...e stages and we need four productscement,water,sand and gravel and we should take ceme...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...when ever material is properly not mix. After that complete that process. Overall, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03861973214 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1737620772 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152945317368 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802022403174 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254451159399 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941259793757 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178483766753 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.