The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purpose.
The first pictorial representation highlights the process of cement production, and the second diagram a diagramatic representation depicts the process, how the concrete can be manufactured by using cement and other equipment.
It can be seen that, the cement is made using two raw material ,and the manufacturing consist of four distinct stages such as: crushing, mixing , rotating heater and grinding. surprisingly, during the production of concrete, it requires only one key steps.
Prior to the production, two main elements; lime stone and clay both crush together with crusher ,and this crusher convert these two components into powdered form. Nextly, for proper mixing of both elements, mixed together with the help of mixer ,and which thereby send the powder to the rotator. As it is in rotatary tube , heat is introduce from the end of the tube before blend dropped on the grinder. Interestingly, grinder change the powder into cement, which is packed into bag.
In order to produce concrete, there are four main elements; cement(15%), water(10%), sand(25%) and small stone(50%) respectively. All these components added, in the right proportion into simple machine namely, concrete mixture ,and for manufacturing concrete this machine start rotating with clockwise direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51776649746 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90367917367 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0966959078 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199830390618 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070587603692 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927775889916 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132652148585 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103239393492 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.