government should spend more money on railways rather than roads.to what extent do you agree or disagree wirh this statement.
In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic is transport. Through this essay, I shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the railways are more cheaper has compared to the cars and buses and also carry number of passengers as compared to the buses.Railways are beneficial for the long journey because Railways are more comfortable for the long journey.we can carry more luggage in the Railways has compare two cars and buses.
Nextly,Railways are time saving, efficient and speedest medium of transport instead of buses and cars because there are more traffic jam in the roads and also some noise pollution which cause many problems. Railways are less cost of each passenger.whereas, buses are more expensive.In railways there are so many seats available for the people but in buses there are few seats also people can see we can so many site seeing and the scenic beauty of the nature threw railways.so that's why people prefer lots of Railways as compared to the buses moreover, moreover in roads there are more pollution which affects our health and cause problems so due to this goverment spend more money on the railways.
A we have seen,here are number of answers to this question, on balancing however, I tend to believe that goverment spends lot of money on railways because public use more railways as compared to the buses so due to this goverment consulting decision by calculating the whole scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78923619001 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.029340957 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.5 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16203159614 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763873955792 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516851036011 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992370645407 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045928228846 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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