The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pictorial charts reveal the information about the water percentage used by the six nation of the world for different purposes.
It can be seen that in North America 13% Water was used for the domestic purposes. wheras, 48%and 39% was used for the industrial and agricultural purposes.In addition to this 19% water had been used for the domestic purposes.Moreover, 10% and 7% percentage had been used for the industrial and agricultural purposes. furthermore, In Europe Water used for different purposes was 53%,15% and 32% respectively.
As far as trend was concerned in Africa 9% and 7% water had used for domestic and industrial purposes.whereas,84%was used for the agricultural purpose whuch is the highest value.Apart from this in Central Asia 7%and 5% water had used for the domestic and industrial purposes and 88% that is the highest percentage which was used for the agricultural purposes. furthermore, In Southeast Asia water was used for different purposes was 7%, 52% and 81% respectively.
overall,it is evident that more water was used for the agricultural purposes by six Nations and less was used for the domestic purposes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22826086957 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32885647697 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423913043478 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0382848562 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386438343197 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257661587231 0.103423049105 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890844392611 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320526704431 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755157718153 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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