Parents are the best teachers, Use
specific reasons and examples to
support your answer. You should
give reasons for your answer using
your own ideas and experience.
Whether parents are our best teachers or not -
is a never-ending debate and people are
divided both in favour and against this
argument. Both have a very strong contribution
and influence on the learning of a child, but in
my opinion parents overtake the teachers in
terms of teaching their children.
First of all I would like to point out that a
teacher is not merely a person who takes a text
book and read texts from there to a student.
Rather a teacher is someone who devotes his/
her times to teach someone everything that
someone needs to know to advance to next
step. Morality, intricacies of life, subject matter
knowledge, art, science, history, value of time
etc. are something that can not be taught
through academic books and a good teacher is
someone who teaches someone these all.
Now that we know the true responsibility of a
teacher, we can easily compare our parents
and teachers. The things that we learn from our
parents are far more important than what we
learn from our teachers. I am not denying the
invaluable knowledge we learn from our
teachers through our academic years, but what
we learn from our parents are incomparable.
We learn to survive, talk, and distinguish well
from bad, values of life, morality and such
important other things from our parents. We are
the true reflection of our parents and our
characters are shaped from their personality
and behaviours. Later the teachers help us to
enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view
of life but the very foundation and ground are
made by our parents.
The parents sacrifice so many things of their
life just to ensure a better life for us and nothing
in this whole world could even be compared
with their sacrifice for us, Think of student who
is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees
would be cast away from the school and the
beloved teachers would scarcely be there to
help him/her. On the other hand the parents
would always be there with their every possible
effort to help the child.
In summary, the things we learn from our
teachers are important for our lives and with
those valuable lessons and knowledge we
prepare for the future but the things we learn
from our parents shapes who we are, who we
become and their contribution is much more
important compared to the contribution of the
traditional academic teachers and that is why in
my opinion parents are best teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...nd read texts from there to a student. Rather a teacher is someone who devotes his/ ...
^^^^^^
Line 24, column 28, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...han what we learn from our teachers. I am not denying the invaluable knowledge we learn from...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 57, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... and that is why in my opinion parents are best teachers.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95443645084 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49485173073 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458033573141 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7931362186 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.733333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.38176352705 1232% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559127295319 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238814596116 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229512030159 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.015611522098 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301593666865 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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