You want to apply for the following Job. write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job waiters required for evening work some experience would be necessary.
Dear Mr Moore.
My name is John. I am writing a letter to you. Because, many days ago,l am finding a job.l was readed a newspaper yesterday.ln that newspaper l saw classified.you want waiters for your hotel.l think that job is perfect for me l can hard work. because,I have many years experience in same field.Also,I did worked in Rotana hotel in Dubai around five years.
But now days.i I am doing a part time job in private company for night shift.if you satisfied from my experience so please you give me Job of night shift.Also I attached my study certificate and experience certificate with the letter.I hope you select me that job.I will be thankful to you.
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Moore. My name is John. I am writing a letter t...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , l
... a letter to you. Because, many days ago,l am finding a job.l was readed a newspap...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...letter to you. Because, many days ago,l am finding a job.l was readed a newspaper ...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... job is perfect for me l can hard work. because,I have many years experience in same fi...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... job is perfect for me l can hard work. because,I have many years experience in same fi...
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Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... perfect for me l can hard work. because,I have many years experience in same fiel...
^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ave many years experience in same field.Also,I did worked in Rotana hotel in Dubai a...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...many years experience in same field.Also,I did worked in Rotana hotel in Dubai aro...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ars experience in same field.Also,I did worked in Rotana hotel in Dubai around five ye...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: i
... Dubai around five years. But now days.i I am doing a part time job in private com...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ive years. But now days.i I am doing a part time job in private company for night shift....
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...o please you give me Job of night shift.Also I attached my study certificate and exp...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o please you give me Job of night shift.Also I attached my study certificate and exp...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... experience certificate with the letter.I hope you select me that job.I will be t...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...he letter.I hope you select me that job.I will be thankful to you. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me that job.I will be thankful to you. Yours sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 120.0 206.0 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77383609225 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.733333333333 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.3246953 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350449399601 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124288368007 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100184210334 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157992819094 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105057599323 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.