Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages?
It is clear that people have a tendency to discard their old or damaged possessions thesedays when they own something new. One of the most controversial issues today relates to Is replacement of old things with new ones give benefits to the owner or not? I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
One side of the argument there are people who argue that the demerits of this considerably outweigh its advantages. The main reason for believing this is that the wastage of electricity, gas and other resources because when there is a rise in the demand due to the more consumtion of the product so, the use of machines will increase for making products that leads to incline in pollution. It is also possible to say that many additional resources are used for production of new things such as plastic, rubber and so on. Most importantly, these elements take long to decompose as a result, these create soil and air pollution. A recent survey research states that Canada and United States of America contains only 5.2% of the world's population are accountable 31.5% of consumtion.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. People often have this opinion because when individuals use new gadgets besides old ones, they can enhance their knowledge by using new features as well as they can also make their works easy. Hence, society moves forward. A second point is that advance technology can also be helpful for medical sector because if doctors replace their old machines with the latest technical gadgets, it will enable them to find more cures. Therfore, new products can minimise number of incidents, such as deaths.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that the possibilities are endless, a person just have to take the initiative and make the change and authorities can also reduce this problem by making new laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...es of America contains only 5.2% of the worlds population are accountable 31.5% of con...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...number of incidents, such as deaths. As we have seen that there are number of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, second, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83183183183 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57039866395 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4170439834 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12940662955 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452401549588 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380656692887 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805021624618 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304185140456 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.