The given bar charts explain the details regarding what graduates and postgraduates in UK did after completing their studies and before starting a full time work in the year 2008.
Overall, in both categories majority of students opted out for higher studies, while few students remained unemployed throughout the year.
First lets look into the destinations of graduates, nearly 22665 students showed their involvement in further studies and marked the highest compared to remaining groups. Students whose decision to go for a part time work stood at 17735 almost , half of the previous one.Similiar to this nearly 16235 students remain unemployed. Still there was 3500 students ready to involve in voluntary works.
Moving om to the descriptions of postgraduates level, compared to graduates they were lesser in number. And, among them 2725 students started with further educations. Number of students whose indulgement in part time work was comparable to this (2535). Still, 1625 students falling into half of the previous two marked contributions to unemployement. And less than 345 postgraduates went for voluntary work
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ing their studies and before starting a full time work in the year 2008. Overall, in ...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'categories'' or 'category's'?
Suggestion: categories'; category's
... in the year 2008. Overall, in both categories majority of students opted out for high...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ps. Students whose decision to go for a part time work stood at 17735 almost , half of th...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r a part time work stood at 17735 almost , half of the previous one.Similiar to th...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similiar
...17735 almost , half of the previous one.Similiar to this nearly 16235 students remain un...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...early 16235 students remain unemployed. Still there was 3500 students ready to involv...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: lesser
... level, compared to graduates they were lesser in number. And, among them 2725 students started ...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...Number of students whose indulgement in part time work was comparable to this 2535. Still...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, regarding, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91008100035 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649425287356 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2221663875 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231755382075 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845806528257 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742663286698 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145434411834 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935703823757 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.