The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The given circular chart illustrate the information about the three charts, compare the total expanditure of the five different amounts for the UK school in 3 years: 1981 , 1991 and 2001.The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently representaion.
It can be seen that in year 1981, 1991 and in 2001 more money was spending on teachers salaries that is 40% : 50% : 45%. Furthermore, 15% money were spending on furniture and equipment in 1998, 5% were spend on furniture and equipment in 1991 and 23% was spending on furniture and equipment in 2001. On the same place, in 1981 a tiny fraction money was spending on insurance, 3% was spending in 1991 and 8% money was spending on insurance in 2001 respectively.
On the other hand, in UK school, more than quarter money were spending on other workers salaries in 1981, 22% money in 1991 and 15% money was spending on other workers in 2001. Futhermore, less than fifth money was spending on books in 1981, 20% in 1991 and only 9% money was spending on books in 2001 respectively.
Overall, it is evident that more money was spending on the teachers salaries as compare to the spending on other workers in the UK school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75480769231 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69074968539 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447115384615 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1528017979 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.285714286 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280868260652 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165428194146 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261968392102 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193717784446 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02131938916 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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