Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Whoever kills one human being is responsible of killing the humanity (Al-Quraan).
By quoting a religious reference in the beginning does not show my intent to support the idea of illegalizing the abortion. Today, in the world of media and awareness, we are facing many issues with regards to social and moral values that hinder in creating a healthy society. There are people who you can see on streets chanting slogans and raising their voices for any or everything they think not suitable for them and at the same time, people who have a different point of view are also there to negate such activists.
Abortion is an act which includes killing of a life which is prohibited in every law. It has its own implications and complications at the same time. Some people say that abortion should be legalized as it will help in controlling the world population. They believe that we do not have sufficient resources to feed the population that is increasing alarmingly and only solution to this problem is abortion.
However, abortion should be the last resort as there are many ways in which you can avoid such scenarios that led to abortion. Government is responsible for providing sex education as a major reason of abortion is pre-marital sex. In addition to this, contraceptive pills and use of condoms should also be promoted in youngsters.
Secondly, we should not ban the abortion as it is necessary in all such conditions where mother is having a life risk in delivering the baby. However, for developing a healthy society in terms of moral and ethical values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86567164179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78059941837 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6977463741 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19582690843 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631729174922 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526774526173 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957742744028 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563284495255 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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