You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where

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You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate how much water industry, agriculture and households use in six areas of the world.

Overall, it can be seen that agricultural activities consumed the most significant amount of water for most regions. However, there are two exceptions to this trend, which are North America and Europe.

In details, up to 88% of water used in Central Asia was to serve agricultural purpose, which was followed by the figures for water used in agricultural section in Africa (84 percent), South east Asia (81 percent) and South America (71 percent). However, while in South East Asia, the industry sector requires 5 percent more of water than domestic use does, the other three areas see the opposite relation. Most notably, the figure for household use of water in South America nearly doubled that for industrial use.

Unlike these regions, water in both Europe and North America is mainly used for industrial activities (53% and 48%, respectively). In addition, both areas exhibit similar patterns for water used in agriculture and households with the ratio of the two figures being 3:1 for North America and slightly higher than 2:1 for Europe.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as to, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59129161689 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7384601726 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174486734656 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934073604283 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465383317497 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123315536382 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453593405051 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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