Some people think that servers short holiday from school are better, while other think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children . Discuss and include your opinion.
It is true said: ” in upcoming vacation give us something to eagerly anticipate “ . Vacation give the happiness to students. One of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic: which summer holiday suitable for children; long tearm and short tearm. I discuss the point of view in upcoming paragraph.
On the one side, there is a group of people believe that the short tearm holiday best. In the short summer vacation children are more active as campare to long tearm holidays for instance, the Delhi government conducted by servey of government school children , which are done the work faster as campare to long holiday , that is 8 out of 10. Moving further, pupils are attached with academic study . They are not forget the subject . Children are become not lazy , when the go the school attend the class after vacation. So, this tearm rejuvenate the student mind.
On the other hand, some people depicts that long tearm holidays more beneficial for children. In the long summer vacation children improve their skill . Skills related to daily life , sport ,and other activities. For example, in long vacation student go to outside with family or friend to gain knowledge and also spent the long time with grandparents, play the many sport activities like swimming so pupils also gain the swimming skills.
To concluded, while there many positive point on the both side of argument .i tend to go with long yearly holiday rather than several short breaks.
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...s something to eagerly anticipate ' . Vacation give the happiness to students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98780487805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4151321218 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.7525203285 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303158063186 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921521252986 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971868792916 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179732931965 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373322607917 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.