Topic: in most countries, with the wild spread use of the Internet, people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the past decades, with dramatic developing of the Internet, most of people are now choosing to work from the comfort of their own home. In this essay, the pros and cons of working from home will be discussed.
On the one hand, people do not need to commute to work is one of the great advantages. In fact, millions of people spend hours travelling from their house to the office every day during the rush-hour traffic. Furthermore, one can utilize time more effectively. For instance, while you have to work with the fixed hours in office, people working remotely have less stress as they can manage their own deadlines and work accordingly.
On the other hand, every garden has its weeds, it can be very easy to be distracted while working from home. In particular, it is very tempting to chat with friends or watch television. Therefore, this leads to reducing how much you work. Another disadvantage of working from home is there is less interpersonal interaction amongst coworkers. It is clear that working in office allows talks to involve inflow of great ideas. This sometime limits people despite the extra freedom they have at home.
In conclusion, working from home or from office they both have positive and negative aspects. As far as I am concerned, I working remotely brings some advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...th dramatic developing of the Internet, most of people are now choosing to work from the comfo...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...tive aspects. As far as I am concerned, I working remotely brings some advantages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96475770925 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65866239058 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6643751409 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338308237538 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11350495675 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601298957437 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209035858557 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185101702429 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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