Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion.
It is true said that the holiday season is a perfect time to reflect on our blessings and seek out ways to make eye better for those around us. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that the some little day off and extensive vacation are superior for children or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that short vocations from school are better for children. Because, they always concentrate from their works. Besides, they all the time serious in their studies. However, they also improve their academic study as well. For instance, the survey was conducted by university of California, the result of survey cleared that the short term vacation was beneficial for their children for the academic point of view as compared to long term vacation for children.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that long term holidays are better for children. If children have long term vacations, they also learn their other skills and participate their in other activities. However, they easily achieve their goals and build their carrier effectively. Also, the mind of children should be sharped in all decisions, if they perform practical activities rather than academic activities. To make their arguments convincing, they claim that they also gain their more knowledge regarding their studies, it would be the perfect example.
Nevertheless, weighing both the option, I believe that, there is no single conclusion, I take this ground that efficient clap requires both use of hands, education is most important for the children as well as other practical activities.
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...ssertions and shape up my opinion by the end. On one side, there is a group of...
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...their in other activities. However, they easily achieve their goals and build th...
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...tion is most important for the children as well as other practical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for instance, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58719925788 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4911003876 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246077007371 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879412368841 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991423584151 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145693091033 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597867513406 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.