Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
When you started to use bicycle to go to work
What the problem is
Suggesting the solution of the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Smith and I am a resident of your building. I am staying since past two weeks with a couple of my classmates in flat no. 204 on second floor. I am writing to report a problem that I have been facing since I shifted here.
I use a bicycle to commute to and fro work. The problem I come across everyday is to park my bicycle in the parking area. As the designed parking is intended to accommodate only cars and mopeds, I find it presumably difficult to park by bicycle. I even tried to approach the parking assistant so that he could provide an alternative space to park the bicycle. But, to my disappointment, an open area with semi-covered shed was provided instead. It is highly inconvenient to park the bicycle as it is not secures and there is no designated area to park.
In order to ameliorate this, I would request you to look into this problem closely and derive a pragmatic solution promptly. Also, a probable solution could be to demarcate the different zones by segregating it into bicycle, two wheeler and four wheeler.
I look forward to hear back from you immediately.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Smith and I am ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve been facing since I shifted here. I use a bicycle to commute to and fro wo...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... facing since I shifted here. I use a bicycle to commute to and fro wor...
^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...and fro work. The problem I come across everyday is to park my bicycle in the parking ar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...nes by segregating it into bicycle, two wheeler and four wheeler. I look forward to...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...g it into bicycle, two wheeler and four wheeler. I look forward to hear back from y...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...er and four wheeler. I look forward to hear back from you immediately. Yours fai...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61057692308 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7821505174 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2848958236 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252646383743 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07687494355 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646457017336 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113503138024 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571772767756 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.