Shopping centers are the heart of city dwellers where they prefer to spend their leisure time. On the one hand, it is a source of entertainment while others believe it is a waste of time. Shopping centers can be an economical source for multiple products when time and money is spent in a rational manner.
Firstly, Shopping centers are a single source of multiple brands. Nowadays, people prefer to go to shopping center because of all utilities and luxury items are available under one roof. This facility, however, is not available in local market. Also, Soothing environment and better ambiance gives people a very relaxing peace of mind and is a stress buster. In Shopping center people since there is monopolistic competition so it helps people to compare apples to apples and buy the best economical product which is quite difficult in local market. Moreover, maximum products are window displayed so people can see a demo of the product first and then make a decision to buy it which is quite useful. Clothes, for instance, cannot be bought until user is satisfied with the size and colour. So Shopping centers gives us this flexibility to try and then buy the product. Also, Shopping centers nowadays represents the development of the society and hence benefiting the overall economical development.
However, there are people on the other hand who go to shopping centers just to do window shopping. Such people not only waste their time but also the essential time of the sellers in the shopping center. Due to these people shopping center always remain unnecessary crowded and misbehaves like eve-teasing occurs. Youth should spend their time wisely instead of such negative things which leaves bad impression on the society. Due to various shopping options people end up in spending more money than planned which results in disturbance of their budget.
To recapitulate, shopping centers can be considered as one-stop shop for many products. In my opinion, shopping center has more advantages as compared to disadvantages. Disadvantages can be taken care but just rational thinking is required. Negative impact is only caused by the youth which go to shopping center just for eve-teasing or other ill activities. Government should take some legitimate action against these activities so that others can learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rational manner" with adverb for "rational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e products when time and money is spent in a rational manner. Firstly, Shopping centers are a sin...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ng centers gives us this flexibility to try and then buy the product. Also, Shopping ce...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ociety and hence benefiting the overall economical development. However, there are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he overall economical development. However, there are people on the other h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16094986807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70817047362 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9978981854 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221272193127 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687635074181 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534452102301 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143159222395 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481798628074 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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