Having a good roommate during the education period is a perfect chance a student might have. Everyone might have a list, according to their priorities, of qualities that a good roommate should have. Since it is impossible to find someone who has all those qualities together, we should select some specific necessary qualities which a roommate must have. Primarily, a good roommate must be honest and considerate and, if he or she is also friendly then, it is even better.
If roommates cannot be trusted then it is a serious dilemma. It is crucially important to have an honest roommate, not just in words but in actions. For instance, usually you need to leave your stuff like your laptop, cellphone, etc with your roommate, and you should be sure they are not stolen or broken. Otherwise, instead of concentrating on your lessons you have to constantly watch your stuff.
Inconsiderate roommate is the next big dilemma students might face. Imagine you are having a serious exam due to the next day while your roommate is having a party or making noise and does not let you sleep. Think of a roommate who does not care about your privacy. These are definitely irritating.
Being friendly would perfect an honest and considerate roommate. Friendly roommates are easy to deal with them. Moreover, it is more enjoyable to be in connection with friendly people. Finally, friendly roommates can end up being best friends.
All in all, having a good roommate is a chance occurrence that does not happen to all. If someone is lucky then, they will have an honest and considerate roommate, if they are even luckier their roommate is also friendly. Otherwise, they should be prepared for everything the future will hold for them and start practicing flexibility and patience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so friendly then, it is even better. If roommates cannot be trusted then it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96321070234 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68663687452 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3519270999 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1052631579 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148353803416 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523454916521 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543647410506 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080997696697 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717756323876 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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