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Describe an ideal education system for your country.
In today's era , it is necessary for each and every person to realise the value of education. The education system of my country , India is more conventional than progressive. The steps taken for change in education system is at snails space as well as here education is neither job oriented nor student oriented. Here , i would like to establish some drawbacks and also few solutions for improvement.
There are various drawbacks of education system. First and foremost, theoratical knowledge is being provided more to students instead of practical knowledge. Thus, people face lots of problems at...
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Sentence: First and foremost, theoratical knowledge is being provided more to students instead of practical knowledge.
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Sentence: All in all, as pe my above discussion, it is evident that change is a part of life and is always required for the progress of mankind in every field.
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
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No. of Words: 287 350
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No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.951 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.692 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
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Sentence Length SD: 6.364 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
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