What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Some people reside in metro cities instead to backward areas. They prefer to live in these cities because rural areas do not have adequate supply of water, food and jobs to the people. These problems can be solved by following various methods. These will be discussed by me in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, people do not get fresh water to drink because water purification systems have not been deployed by the government in some of the rural areas. Thereby many people face health issues. Moreover, in the rural areas water sanitation systems also have not been arranged properly. Excessive rain cause floods in the rural areas. All these facilities are only available to the people who live in the cities.
In addition to this, people also confront problems of hygienic supply of food. As in some of the areas transportation system is not good, the supply of nutrient food is inadequate in such areas. Moreover, owing to less industrialization in the rural areas, there are less jobs are available for the denizens. Thus, they migrate to another nation and metro city so that they could get employment.
The problem of water, food and job can easily be solved if the government take stringent actions. Firstly, water sanitation and purification system must be installed in all the rural areas. Moreover, Industrialists must encourage to run their business from rural areas. By encouraging and implementing stern rules it is possible to eradicate the problem.
In the end, in the rural areas shortage of food, employment and inadequate supply of water cause various problems for the denizens, therefore, government and industrialists must think to solve these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...alization in the rural areas, there are less jobs are available for the denizens. Th...
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Message: Did you mean 'running'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: running
...Moreover, Industrialists must encourage to run their business from rural areas. By enc...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74822124597 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489130434783 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4291049986 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255890576555 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084754700189 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560315995378 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159766461474 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306300053683 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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