Some people think that cars are better way to transportation around the city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, most of the people hold the opinion that private vechicle such as a car is more invaluable and others are restrictedely in the favour of riding cycles. I will delve both facets before reaching to reasoned conclusion.
There are multifarious benefits of using cars which can be clearly seen that in this paragraph. Firstly, it is a great deal of invaluable time saving technique. As a person who go to his job he easily go to his work with the help of cars but if he does not have any vehicle then a waste of his time in significant amount because public transportation does not have a proper time.Secondly, travelling by the car is a comfortable source. It is a reliable as well as when people sit in the car they feel comfart because all seats are made by a unique technique whereas, the condition of the buses is very worse and some times people face lot of troubles during the travelling by bus.
On the other hand, riding cycles is a realistic source and gives some positive results. First of all , it considers as a ecofriendly source because others vehicle spread worse pollution while , this is a pollution less method and gives contribution to protect the environment. Second of all, body become more healthier and fit due to the ridding cycle. Admittedly, it is a huge sourse of exercise and through to this body protect from disease as well as active.
In crux, it depends on the human needs while, both cars and cycles gives lots of benefits to everyone's.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...As a person who go to his job he easily go to his work with the help of cars but i...
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...nsportation does not have a proper time.Secondly, travelling by the car is a comfortable...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ives some positive results. First of all , it considers as a ecofriendly source be...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...results. First of all , it considers as a ecofriendly source because others vehic...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ers vehicle spread worse pollution while , this is a pollution less method and giv...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...environment. Second of all, body become more healthier and fit due to the ridding cycle. Admit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65267175573 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75490786278 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1674502485 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164630221505 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549613053265 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444468985851 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100291174652 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301490945108 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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