Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

There is no doubt that popular sports events are very important. While some people believe football World’s Cup and Olympics games are essential for dissolve international tension and world peace, others they don’t agree with that. In this assay I will discuss both sides of the argument and explains my support for the later view.
One of the most significant benefits of the sport in particular football that make people happy. Also it contributes to release the patriotic feeling through encouragement of their teams. In addition to, the international events like Olympic games which play an important role in giving peace between countries.
However, football matches have many drawbacks in the last international event recently, World Cup Russia 2018 for example, the loser teams such Egyptian team didn’t get of any point and defeated in every watch. There was made people in Egypt feeling pity, angry and sad. In contrast, Russia's team has presented incredible matches each player of the eleven made his best efforts, which make the Russian happy and excited.
For another view, the international sports have indirect effect on the income generally, on economic, at 2020 the World's Cup will be happening in Qatar.
In conclusion, the international sports events are very important at several levels income, relationships between countries and world peace that paving the road to make people happiest. In my opinion, the benefits of international sports are outweighed by their drawbacks, I would prefer to set up more and more events.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a 2018 for example, the loser teams such Egyptian team didn't get of any poi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, no doubt, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32793522267 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76808817018 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0168409544 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315313201043 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981851775341 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694945496723 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163991883848 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484622699023 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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