The line graph show the percentage of people living below poverty line acoording to world standards in developing countries for the year 1950 to 2050
The given linear charts depict the information about the people living below poverty line the servey conducted by world standards in four developing countries like China, India, Mexico or Brazil. The data is callibrated in percentum. It is clearly and coherently represented.
Conclusion :-overall , it is evident that poverty line will be increase in Mexico or Brazil ,and poverty line of people will be decrease in India or China in 2050.
It can be seen that,the poverty line of India and China start form same place that was 10 .nextly both were increased in year 1950 that was minor cross the two fifth or second was 30%.futhermore , in year 2000 the China or India increased gradually that was 60% or 70% .then both are decreased fastly in the 2050 ,China will be 10 or India will be 40.
Having a quick glance upon the line chart , the poverty line of people in mexico was four fifth in 1900, then it was minor increased in whole year ,and end of year it will be 90%.moreover, Mexico was three in ten in starting year .mexio was remain same next 50 year. while , Mexico was grow up fastly in 2000 it was cross the Brazil poverty line , it was approximately 100. Last of the it will be 90 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55348837209 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45793421249 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.780187759 43.030603864 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244296422567 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107574536066 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10671810879 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180686080241 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663087872362 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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