The illustrations present the stages of the life of a lady bug. It is clearly seen that it has 4 phases starting from the egg stage up to the full grown bug and its anatomical features are also revealed.
First, eggs are laid by and adult lady bird under leaves of plants or trees and they are left to hatch for 2 to 5 days. The hatched eggs become larvas and spent 21 days until they form into pupa. Cocoons are formed under side of leaves in the pupal stage which lasts for a week and an adult lady bug emerge afterwards and the cycle begins again
The lady bug has red elytra a distinguishing part that differentiate it from other insects. This is seen on its wings and black dots are also evident. Abdomen of the bug serves as its body and on each distal side are 3 legs used for crawling. Its head is connected to the body by a pronotum which is a black globular part white 2 white spots. The it also has 2 antennae and a pair of eyes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'antenna' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'antennae', 'antennas'.
Suggestion: antennae; antennas
...n each side. The bugs head consist of 2 antenna and a pair of eyes and a globular part ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19875776398 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3090725199 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7101497331 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0768442849408 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275142011836 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042828096067 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463523576081 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392069679507 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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