The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates, population of India and China in the year of 2000 and expected growth level by the year of 2050. Source obtained from UN population division and units are measured in billions.
Overall, Indian population is predicted to increasing every year and reaching upto 1600 billions by 2050 from 1000 billion in 2000. Where as, China shows declining in the year after 2020 such as, they started over 1200 billion population in 2000 and reach in above 1400 billion and slight decrease year by year and ends with below 1400 billion in 2050.
Population in India on 2020 below the level of China that is about 1400 billion. After that a dramatic peak in the growth of people with 50 to 100 billion every ten years. About 2025, population in India climbed on 1400 billion later which is 200 billion of total population may increase in pictures.
Meanwhile, in China mere 200 billion of total population is grown over 50 yrs. After 2020 they controlled their growth only above 1400 billion after that there is a systematic reduction in population and they reached below 1400 billion by the end of given period.
- The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown You should write at least 150 words 69
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below show the percentage of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2000 67
- Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extend do you agree? 84
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...200 billion of total population is grown over 50 yrs. After 2020 they controlled ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82142857143 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37732656381 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2066641037 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264136390684 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142122894481 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868239965513 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194649950036 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675530576731 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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