The line graph illustrates that how many people were there in India and China from 2000 to 2020 together with projected to the year 2050.
India, one of the most populated countries in the world, seeing a stable growing trend in its population. It started at 1000 billion people in 2000 and is predicted to reach 1600 billion people in 2050, increasing by almost 60%.
On the other hand, however, there is a fluctuated trend of population experienced in China during the five decades. The number of people in China was 1250 billions in 2000, substantially larger than the number of population in India. After achieving its peak in year 2030 with the projected number of 1450 billion people, sharing the same number of people with India, a slight decrease will occur and the final population will be ended at 1400 billions in 2050, smaller than that of India.
Overall, the projection is that even though China still owns the largest population among all the countries, the number of Indians will outnumber Chinese in a certain point of time.
- The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Each year crime committed by young people is on the rise What are the reasons Suggest some solutions 56
- An increasing number of people are changing their careers What are the reasons Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47913801088 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6152544021 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208639282811 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105667962792 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333281765243 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12884165557 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038456248509 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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