Nowadays many people are diagnosed qith anorexia. What do you think the causes of this are? What can be done to improve the situation?
Of late people are making strict dietry changes to look lean and to avoid weight gains. In some severe cases, this is being attributed to as psychiatric disorders termed as anorexia. The following paragraphs shall discuss the possible contributing factors and counter measures.
The major reason behind avoiding food is an influence of mass media. The common person craves to copy the fashion of their favourite actors and models to look attractive and to attain a slender body which makes them skip meals and they also indulge in extensive physical exercises without considering the aftermath. Secondly, the stress to fit into a box. As certain professions demands sleek physique as employees for instance, airlines crew, entertainment industries and workers for front desk in multinational companies. This can cause a huge stress, lack of self esteem and a constant preoccupation to get recognition.
Certain measures should be adopted to combat this unhealthy habit. The most significant one is an awareness which can be given at school and college levels to convey the advantages of balanced diet and the basic need of physical and mental health. Another improvement can be made by consulting a professional for counseling. The main focus of counseling should be on enhancement of self confidence, acceptance of self, stress management and behavioral modifications by replacing pessimistic thoughts into positive ones.
To recapitulate, the habit of anorexia can lead to serious health issues. The above mentioned techniques can be used to address the problem else one day we will have an unhealthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38188976378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98193716968 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685039370079 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2868275631 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148095994158 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497803199099 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467115176586 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858445631886 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277362829104 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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