The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by neocsc on Sat, 07/14/2018 - 14:18

The bar chart illustrates the ten countries who most produced and consumed electricity in 2014.

Overall, China and the United States had ranked the first and second positions in both production and consumption of electricity, respectively. On the other hand, the Republic of Korea showed the least production and electricity usage. In addition to that, apart from Germany, all the countries produced more electricity than they had consumed it.

With regards to the production of electricity, both China and the US had produced together almost 10,000 billions of kWh in 2014.
Followed by them were Russia and Japan, that produced nearly 1,000 billions of kWh each. India and Canada accounted for around 1,500 billion, which is the approximate amount of France, Brazil and Germany together and is four times the production of the Republic of Korea.

Concerning electricity expenditure, around 8,000 billions of kWh were used by China and the US, which represents more than triple consumed by Russia and Japan. While France and Brazil had near the same expense of 455 billion each, Germany spent around 25% more than the Republic of Korea, which had a consumption estimated at less than 450 billions of kWh.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '000 billion'.
Suggestion: 000 billion
... the US had produced together almost 10,000 billions of kWh in 2014. Followed by them were Ru...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '000 billion'.
Suggestion: 000 billion
...ussia and Japan, that produced nearly 1,000 billions of kWh each. India and Canada accounted fo...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '000 billion'.
Suggestion: 000 billion
...rning electricity expenditure, around 8,000 billions of kWh were used by China and the US, whic...
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Line 8, column 337, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '450 billion'.
Suggestion: 450 billion
...ad a consumption estimated at less than 450 billions of kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, apart from, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2193877551 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69474224681 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8270919962 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133077597346 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705263244389 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655608727556 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951740621851 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071582056377 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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