There is a problem with the road outside of your house.
Write a letter to your local councillor.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what the problem is
tell the councillor what you would like to be done
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to a problem with Dickens Street, Melton in the council of Stoningworth. I am a resident of Dickens street, and have lived in the bluestone house on the corner of Dickens and Melrose for seven years.
After last week’s major storm, the stormwater pipe running from Melrose to Dickens burst, causing the road to flood. An emergency crew was called which came and fixed the pipe, stopping the flood. However, after the water drained away, it became clear that some damage was done to the road surrounding the drain area. There is now a large pothole where drain water and rainwater has collected. Many cars have accidentally driven over the hole not realising how deep it was and they have done damage to their cars as a result.
I request that you send a construction crew to place a warning sign in front of the pothole to warn drivers until the issue is resolved. I also suggest that the problem is fixed as soon as possible to avoid further damage to the road, and to people’s cars.
Yours faithfully,
Richard Bast
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-10-03 | SATPREET SINGH | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77659574468 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53858855855 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7899355142 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781727698698 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332212005965 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390556942848 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441600702251 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223598633753 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.