Recently, the phenomenon of the best invention during the last 100 years and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that all these inventions are highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of people. I am inclined to believe that the advent of the computer can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the computer as most effective handmade of the human. At first, the computer cannot cure or prevent disease like antibiotics. However, it caused the many advances in medical devices to cure and diagnose the illnesses. For example, some medical equipment such as MRI are working by computer systems to find the symptoms of diseases.
In addition, the computer has not the ability to transport travelers to different places like the airplane. But, it made many developments in airplanes such as navigation devices and other controllers. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that the computer has become an essential part of a significant number of transportation vehicles like airplane.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the best inventions in the last century, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the computer are far outweighed the proficiencies of other inventions such as airplane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3275862069 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04058702246 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3559232689 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15024520695 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510561047479 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698060957064 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962167559873 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672150940066 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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