The first map illustrate the map of Peyton Park now, while the second one is [a propose about possible] the changes, which can be] done [at the park].
Firstly, in the centre of the Park, there is a lake[.] In addition, to the south of the park] [is] a [large] parking lot, [while to the East side] a Tennis Court [is present]. [Finally, people can take advantage of surrounded by three tables with [and] chairs [,] to the North[.]
[The plan for] As for the second one, [proposed] changes [show a few of differences.] Alongside the lake, a swimming dock was [added] to the [east side] of [the lake], [and moreover,] [an area] with [some games for children] [would built] to the north[region] of the [park, just between the picnic area and the lake. The Picnic area [would locate near the court,] [to] the north-zone] of it, with the Tennis Court, in fact, would be to the West of the lake. While the parking lot was still remained to the South of the lake.
- The charts below show information about consumer decisions regarding mobile phone purchases in two different countries. 61
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. 56
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. 11
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 50
- As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...yton Park now, while the second one is [a propose about possible] the changes, which can ...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '[' seems to be missing
...bout possible] the changes, which can be] done [at the park]. Firstly, in t...
^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '[' seems to be missing
....] In addition, to the south of the park] [is] a [large] parking lot, [while to t...
^
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
...East side] a Tennis Court [is present]. [Finally, people can take advantage of su...
^
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ]
...nded by three tables with [and] chairs [,] to the North[.] [The plan for] As fo...
^^
Line 6, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ]
...[east side] of [the lake], [and moreover,] [an area] with [some games for children...
^^
Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...] with [some games for children] [would built] to the north[region] of the [park, jus...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ]
...Picnic area [would locate near the court,] [to] the north-zone] of it, with the Te...
^^
Line 6, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fact, would be to the West of the lake. While the parking lot was still remained to t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, as for, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58959537572 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33599304842 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.644399789 43.030603864 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.8 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.6 5.23603664747 355% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234363165596 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121513327109 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958181798267 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168378429515 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824127732519 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.