School is one of the most important part of our lives. Although the main priority of attending school is studying, developing good communication skills is no less important. Some students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. People have different opinions whether what are the most important qualities of a roommate. Some consider that it is crucial that your roommate has same taste and preferences as you, but i dont necesarily agree with that. I strongly believe that two most important charachteristics of a great roommate are friendliness and ability of being organized.
First of all, In my opinion if a roommate is friendly it very easy to communicate with him. Spending time with him/her is full of pleasure since you can understand each other and enjoy your free time, even if your interests don't collide. With a friendly roommate you will not feel loneliness,furthermore You can help each other out with homework or any other activity that you have problem with. The key of true friendship is understanding each other which is crucial in cooperating.
Secondly, I believe that a good roommate is required to be organized,otherwise you will come across a lot of problems since school work and daily life in general needs to be organized. It is massively helpful to introduce a schedule that consists of daily work and the person who does it. For example i can wash dishes an clean rooms once, but my roomate will do the same next time and we swap around periodically. The schedule can avoid tidyness problems and misunderstanding between you and your roommate. This is why i believe that a roommate needs to be organized.
In conclusion, The points made in my essay support the idea that a good roommate for me is a person who is friendly and organized. This charachteristics make it easier for me to get on well with a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87460815047 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12313819697 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2443893316 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273446352389 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946855399427 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116934418654 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15835164488 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131745306039 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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