These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about both confidence and knowledge are necessary to success, and if it should be viewed as positive or negative impact to the players, while it is possible to claim that sport provides a lot of entertainment to people, this essay will provide an overview of the matter and discuss the related points with example.
There are several reasons why confidence and knowledge both are necessary to achieve success. One of them is that if a person having extensive knowledge alone can not achieve goals without having confidence with him. It can also be argued that confidence extracts the best effort from us which is important to win the race. For example, many poor african nations are well behind in international sports, but they are masters in long diatance running competitions as they have high confidence in such sports compared to other games. Hence, confidence helps us to achieve success more easily even if do not have enough knowledge.
Those who argue for knowledge have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that confidence without knowledge can not help us to success in games. One should definitely have knowledge to predict the winning strategy.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that confidence and knowledge are the main pillar of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'extracts the best'.
Suggestion: extracts the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98290598291 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59429517371 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7275634018 50.4703680194 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257612185092 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120177211041 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571875275513 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158842601243 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578119288992 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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