The article states that the opinion of four days week work would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and employees who decided to take this option. however the professor refutes this opinion and oppose each of the author's reasons.
First, the article claims that the shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alter and as a result they would make fewer costly errors in their work.in the other hand, the professor opposes this point by saying that this opinion might force the company spend more and a lot more money .he gives an example of this cost as hiring new employees needs offices space ,computers,and also training costs. as a result these cost will reduce the company profit not increase it as the article claims.
Second , the article posits that there is an benefit for the country as a whole by claiming that one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. the professor says that this opinion might be wrong because hiring is very costly as he mentions before. nevertheless ,the company might ask the employees to work over time . it might consider the four days work is similar to five days work and no additional jobs will be created.
Third,the reading explains that the option of four day workweek would be better for individual employees,yet the professor opposes this point.he explains that more free time will decrease the job abilities and also will decrease the advanced of the career. moreover, he states that there will not be any promotions to ensure coverage to supervision for entire work week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...loyees who decided to take this option. however the professor refutes this opinion and ...
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...loyees who decided to take this option. however the professor refutes this opinion and ...
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... oppose each of the authors reasons. First, the article claims that the short...
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... company spend more and a lot more money .he gives an example of this cost as hiri...
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...ace ,computers,and also training costs. as a result these cost will reduce the com...
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...stly as he mentions before. nevertheless ,the company might ask the employees to w...
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...ight ask the employees to work over time . it might consider the four days work is...
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...ll decrease the advanced of the career. moreover, he states that there will not be any p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96085409253 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41838653647 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.041658849 49.2860985944 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.4 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513016297201 0.272083759551 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197711353502 0.0996497079465 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122716729921 0.0662205650399 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321479119351 0.162205337803 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493053153538 0.0443174109184 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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