Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Nowadays, it is important to consider the significance of water since there has been a rise in its demand over recent years. This demand has become worldwide problem. This essay will explore some of the problems associated with this rise in demand and propose some possible solutions.
One of the significant reasons of rise in water demand over the past few years is that people are careless in utilizing it. They do not consider it as a limited resource. This ignorance can be seen in simple daily practices. For instance, many people keep the tap running while washing the dishes. It is things like these that add up in the increasing the water supply demand in a country. To counter this, governments need to educate the individuals about water being a limited resource, so these things can be avoided. As a result, people will use it wisely and this, in turn, will decrease the overall demand for water.
Another reason for the increasing water supply demand is pollution. Due to urbanization, nowadays, we have a large number of factories in the country. Some of these factories pollute the water. In USA, Texas, for example, a clothing factory polluted its nearby water pond by dumping their waste into it. Similar practices like these that pollute fresh water is likely to cause water shortage and thus increase in water supply demand. To solve this, government should impose strict laws to stop factories from dumping their waste in the nearby water resources. This will result in stopping the water pollution by considerable amount and thus lowering the increasing water demand we have today.
To conclude, it can be said that while there are causes such as people’s ignorance and pollution that spike the water demand, there are also some solutions like education and introduction of laws that needs to be followed to counter this issue. If we are to save our planet, we need to take water seriously as it is a limited resource.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92749244713 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55699446953 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501510574018 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6719559066 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8421052632 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278620779059 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100560783079 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667582456743 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185111644702 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432368830064 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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