Although both the reading and the listening passage deal with the same topic: the relationship between dinosaurs and endotherms, their prospective are different. While the author of the reading passage believes that dinosaurs are kind of endotherms, the lecturer casts doubt on the writer’s idea. He thinks that dinosaurs are not related to endotherms.
The first point made in the reading passage is that polar dinosaur fossils are founded in Polar Region, which was extremely cold. Therefore, creatures living there must have the ability to maintain their body temperature to alive in such conditions ,which is consistent with endotherm’s feature .On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts the writer’s idea and asserts that polar region, in fact, is a warm area. Moreover, he argues that the dinosaur often migrates or hypernates in cold season. Therefore, there is no evidence of concluding dinosaur is endotherm.
Another point in the reading passage is that legs underneath dinosaur’s body support its feature as endotherm. It is mentioned that the legs under the body helps creatures to run fast. However, the lecturer refutes this argument and claims that dinosaurs’ legs are not used for running. He puts forth his idea by saying that legs support the dinosaur in its big size and weights, which is not related to running.
The last point made in the reading passage is that Haversian canels in bones makes the case that dinosaur is endotherm. The article notes that Haversian canels improve the growth of creatures. On the contrary, the lecturer claims that dinosaur’s bone improves with growth spring. He elaborates on this by clarifying the word growth spring, which means grow in season . Therefore, the characteristic of dinosaur is inconsistent with that of endotherms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: .
...consistent with endotherm's feature .On the other hand, the lecturer contradi...
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...nsistent with endotherm's feature .On the other hand, the lecturer contradict...
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...rowth spring, which means grow in season . Therefore, the characteristic of dinosa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in fact, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3951048951 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96701301644 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5227876672 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161322200414 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574052073349 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488271268753 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992498888559 0.162205337803 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058837922675 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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