Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is stated by few that upgradations in the field of hi-tech has made our way of living immensely comprehensive. Moreover, the only way to get rid of it to say ‘no to technology’ inorder to live a well sorted life. In my opinion, I believe, it has both pros and cons and it totally relies on an individual, how he made use of these developments in their day to day activities.
As regards pros, rather than making our lives difficult, it has made our lives not only easier but also comfortable. Technology has provided fruitful results in every sphere of life whether it is industry, academics, banking or any other sector. For instance, the microwaves, ovens, airfryes have relived the house ladies from putting much of efforts in cooking since, these devices not only save a lot of time but also provide efficient results because every second is essential for working ladies. Not only this, with the advent of computers, softwares as well as machines have reduced a lot of manual work which inturn have mitigated the burden on the shoulders of humans. Similarly, in banking sector as well the potential of computers is utilised upto the optimum level due to which the manual work has diminished to lot of extent. Thus, instead of making it difficult, it has relived much of stress.
Taking into consideration the complexity of hi-tech. Crimes have risen to much extent. Consequently, many people have been trapped in circle of cyber crimes and hacking, making their lives more complicated. For instance, my aunt has become the victim of cyber crime and her account was hacked by some hackers. Therefore, her confidential information was misused due to which she had to face severe repercussions. Apart from this, the dependency level on gadgets has touched the peak because of which injuries are suffered by them during using machines.
In the final analysis, I would state that hi-tech is kind of mixed bag providing the individuals with both difficulties and solutions. Nevertheless, without any iota of doubt pros are miles ahead than cons but at the end of the day, the only way to live a sort out life is to use these gadgets attentively and within limits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... only way to get rid of it to say 'no to technology' inorder to live a w...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...os; inorder to live a well sorted life. According to me, I believe, it has both pros and cons a...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...omplexity of hi-tech. Crimes have risen to much extent. Consequently, many people ...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng machines. In the final analysis, i would state that hi-tech is kind of mix...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... the individuals with both difficulties as well as solutions. Nevertheless, without any io...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as regards, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87935656836 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78654828148 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565683646113 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2074956667 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.058823529 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15916280617 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478362644543 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453918600593 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925609988821 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301505283822 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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