Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others , however that school is the place to learn this.
For modern world, people say that parent play an important role to become member of society, while others claim that school environment is important. In my opinion, both parents and school can should be able to study proper person of society.
First of all, having better member of society is one of the most significant thing. I completely believe that parents are responsible for children to prepare right members because children home environment - that study discipline, respect others, personality from there - could affect child's good upbringing which influence their prospective life. For example, According to Japanese society, they pay attention to learn valuable member from early age rather than others which is successful person , wealthy man so on. As a result, they could be contribute to generate positive society. Although parents teach them to belong in society's appropriate member, if home condition is poor , there are not certain consequence.
On the other hand, another effective replace is absolutely school that is pupil's second home. In the school zone, children would learn how to deal with people, collaboration or team work, right habits including to help people, and listen other etc.
If children shyness and selfish, thanks to school he or she could be able to extrovert yourself in addition to it is clear contributing people who is their teacher is necessary. This way, school can play crucial role in teaching children about what is society, how to be better member of society.
To conclude, I fully agree that there are benefit consequent by cooperating both parents and school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25968992248 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67285964108 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4730089348 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41289539989 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135564751773 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728578786103 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206128383678 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776624949511 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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