In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.
Different countries have different regulations on when kids should start to go to schools. While some countries think that children need to undergo their formal learning starting at four years old, many believe it is better to wait until they are seven or eight years old. This essay will argue why seven or eight years old is an absolutely imperative standard for children to initiate their journeys on formal education.
To begin with, there are some benefits of putting children to schools at the age of four. They will obviously be able to graduate earlier than those who attend kindergarten later. As a result, they can draw some money in advance. My friends who went to schools at four years old, for example, succeeded to generate their first income two years before those attended schools at five years old. The earlier they begin, the better their financial status will be.
However, it is wise to start a formal education at the age of seven or eight instead. A lot of people believe that children who have started studying at the age of four tend to suffer from heavy depression. The evidence is shown by Harvard researchers who found that around 95% of those kids who committed suicide due to depression were forced to go to schools when they turned to four. Hence, attending formal institutions at the age of seven or eight is indeed an intelligent move.
In conclusion, this essay argued that people who are against the idea of following the formal education path at the age of seven or eight have not considered the potential risk. In my opinion, it is entirely justified for kids to be seven or eight years old before they go to schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to start'.
Suggestion: to start
...n need to undergo their formal learning starting at four years old, many believe it is b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75432525952 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45313345964 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505190311419 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7976372607 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474397320466 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168950400631 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943300404067 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298742555401 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504882655263 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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