Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
The capital punishment has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of capital punishment. I totally disagree with the statement that without death penalty our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that there are many other factors which can be implementing to reduce the crimes.
The capital punishment is coming from the past. When there was a significant increase in crimes than the rulers started to give death penalty to the victims. Moreover, in modern society also this is applicable for some serious crimes such as rape, terror attacks and murders. For example, in India Kasab the victim from Mumbai bomb attacks hanged till death. However, the death of Kasab will not stop the other terrorists to do crimes.
Therefore, regime can take some other actions to stop the crimes within their society. Moreover, according to the Psychologist research it has been cleared that when a person do some crime than he does that due to some Psychological disorders. For example, if somebody has grown up in the poor family and suffered a lot for money than he might commit a crime of stealing money. So government should do some work to avoid all the poverty rates and educate people about the bad effects of crimes.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of death penalty. However, we cannot be oblivious to the facts that death penalty can reduce the crime rates. I would like to conclude that without death penalty crimes rate can be reduced if regimes implement other factors such as looking for the reasons why accused attempted such crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94533762058 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51165128542 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3901233472 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 2.75862068966 435% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262546513222 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859245151955 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107276546271 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156614064188 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102256917909 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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