Both reading passage and the lecture are about one of clues whether full-length portrait of a teenage girl illustrates Jane Austen. The writers states this portrait is image of monumental English novelists Jane Austen and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states this portrait might be illustrates relatives of Jane and refutes each of the authors claim.
First, the reading passage states family of Jane Austen states the teenage girl in the painting is image of Jane Austen. The professor refutes this point. He states the family recognized the picture after seven years of Jane Austen's death.
Second, the author claims that the face of the teenage girl looks similar to adult Jane Austen's sketch which made by sister of Austen. On the other hand, the professor casts doubt onto this claim by stating the image in the portrait shows to relative of Jane. He states, the image might be illustrate the one of the cousins of Jane or their child.
Third, the writer states that Ozias Humbrey who might be the painter of this portrait was painter while Jane Austen was teenager. Conversely, to this claim professor claims that William Lake sold the canvas of portrait while Jane Austen was 28 years old. So, Jane was not a teenager when this portrait painted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
...rl illustrates Jane Austen. The writers states this portrait is image of monumental En...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, look, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 216.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26333496973 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7582010406 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439852714486 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205556298098 0.0996497079465 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124550189224 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32006477503 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145860378683 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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