The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Although the memo from the advertising director of the company looks convincing at first, there are some questions which should be answered for fair evaluation.
Firstly, the report from the marketing department states that, fewer people attended the movies compared to other years. However, the report may need to consider some external factors, such as, the time during which the movies were released. For example, a movie may have fewer attendance during the elections, since people attend debates or vote in the polling station. Furthermore, movies of Super Screen could be competing against each other, which would have led to low attendance.
Secondly, the memo states that, specific Super Screen movies had better reviews. However, it does not provide insights on the ratings of other movies. For instance, movies with better ratings, can have better attendance than previous years. The remaining set of movies may require an improvement in quality. One of the major assumptions in the recommendation is, the quality of all movies are great since specific movies got positive reviews. Answering questions regarding to the ratings of the remaining movies would provide clarity in evaluating the recommendation.
In summary, the questions related to the current affairs at the time of release, possiblity of competition between Super Screen movies, and insights on the number of positive reviews for all movies and their relation to the attendance must be answered for the evaluation of the memo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6313559322 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38657417748 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6285885532 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132416337615 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501380791954 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757418521674 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920644146261 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104412008407 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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