You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:Explain why you are selling the television.Describe the television.Suggest a date when your friend can come and see i
Dear Swati,
Hope you are doing well. As you know I am moving abroad in two weeks and have now realized that I’ll not be able to carry all the items with me as some of them are too big. Sam mentioned that you were on a lookout for a second-hand television and therefore, am writing to you to check if you'd be interested in buying mine.
Let me tell you a bit about the television. It is a 32” Sony Bravia 2015 model number MB332 with a 5-year warranty. It also has an HDMI cable and a USB port where you can plug-in a pen-drive and watch movies or listen to music. It is in excellent working condition and I’ve not once faced any problem with it in the past 3 years.
Since I’m leaving the country by this month-end, it’d be best if you can come and have a look at the TV by 20th or 21st. This will give me enough time to find another buyer in case you decide against buying it.
I look forward to seeing you. Let me know if you can’t make it.
All the Best,
Aparna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...a second-hand television and therefore, am writing to you to check if youd be inte...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...herefore, am writing to you to check if youd be interested in buying mine. Let me...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve and watch movies or listen to music. It is in excellent working condition and I...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
...os;d be best if you can come and have a look at the TV by 20th or 21st. This will gi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24226804124 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26666429618 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4522796152 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195055743874 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805933884047 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581753797496 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133003018872 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297281854752 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.